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Aeon's Brain Farts
Aeon Posted: Thu Dec 4 18:17:26 2003 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I.
I hate to sound conceited
But itís the best thing I can do
Iím just the thing you needed
Iím just the thing for you
Every idiosyncrasy you crave
All those tiny little habits
Iíve made my own and saved
What you want, I have it
II.
Iíve got my finger on the button
And itís ready to be pushed
Ending all the things youíve done
All the words you said are hushed
My heart wrenched holocaust
Will consume the worst of you
All of your petty empty thoughts
All of those lies you used
III.
To my friend, the silence
And the faint flickering
Lightly in the darkness
Of a pale computer screen
Iíve bled so many times
On these hallowed keys
Iíve written oh so many rhymes
Many more come after these
IV.
I heard a girl once
Told me to kill myself
Do the world a service
And end this living hell
I didnít know what to say
So I thought for a few
Then responded in this way
ďYou know what, fuck you!Ē
V.
I am the space man
Walking on the sun
Burning myself alive again
Burning myself alive again
I am the wanderer
The man without a name
Searching for myself again
Searching for myself again


 
libra Posted: Thu Dec 4 19:55:58 2003 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I really like that aeon.


 
bluellama Posted: Fri Dec 5 11:09:25 2003 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I really like alll of it, very creative! My favourite lines were:
My heart wrenched holocaust
Will consume the worst of you

those words just reached out and grabbed me. Keep up, I'd like to hear more.


 
FN Posted: Sat Dec 6 12:17:59 2003 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Like II the best.


Nice work.


If you don't mind I'll print it and put it in my poetry map (which I created to prevent the loss of poetry and lyrics I like if they'd disappear from the net or my memory)


 
Aeon Posted: Sun Dec 7 02:02:52 2003 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Christophe said:
>Like II the best.
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>Nice work.
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>If you don't mind I'll print it and put it in my poetry map (which I created to prevent the loss of poetry and lyrics I like if they'd disappear from the net or my memory)


Go for it. Anyone can feel free to take anything of mine that I've written.


 



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