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Cherry_Moon Posted: Tue Apr 18 13:55:15 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  words sent, recieved
his words sent me shivering in shirts short sleeved
friend! don't be so blunt
should never have pulled that stupid stunt
dark knowledge led me scattering fast
black lust inside him always lasts
wishing those thoughts you'd cast
there's a chance we could find better days
black starless nights between us lay
apart i think we'd better stay
reaching out to you as a father, your mouth lathers
the results though are sadder
my small tender soul i gather
burn, burned, burnt on your desires
you fatal inner fires
situation isn't yet dire
so loud is your heart break
it makes my soul ache
just makes the saddest tears fall for your sake
trapped- not wanting to lose
forcing to choose
between friendship and demeaning myself as if i were drunk on boose



 
Cherry_Moon Posted: Tue Apr 18 14:08:01 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  any comments would be welcomed


 
Mesh Posted: Tue Apr 18 14:14:01 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  "there's a chance we could find better days
black starless nights between us lay"


I really liked that.



 
Mouse Posted: Tue Apr 18 15:02:00 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I like it. Nicely put, brava.
Dear sweet Cherry, you are too forgiving. It's a beautiful trait, but it will attract freaks.

I know you can take care of yourself, but my offer still stands.

Mouse


 
Cherry_Moon Posted: Tue Apr 18 16:06:43 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Mouse said:
>I like it. Nicely put, brava.

thank you mousie dearest *tacklehugs*. do you like my avatar?

>Dear sweet Cherry, you are too forgiving.

I've been told that several times before.... it's an issue.

>It's a beautiful trait, but it will attract freaks.

i have a gift for attracting freaks. they seem to absorb my goodness and turn it into something it's not. like it's not a booty call. the last person i attracted however was not a freak. he was a cutie pie. ;p

>I know you can take care of yourself, but my offer still stands.

*hugs* yeah. I'm not a vengeful sort of person unless it involves exes ;) or complete assholes. i don't do well with standing up for myself at times. which is why i get walked all over.


 
addi Posted: Tue Apr 18 16:30:15 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Cherry_Moon said:

>should never have pulled that stupid stunt


nice, cherry


 
choke Posted: Tue Apr 18 18:04:08 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  I like "burn, burned, burnt on your desires", the last line seems a litle strained to fit with the rhyming scheme...


 
Cherry_Moon Posted: Wed Apr 19 09:47:24 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  addi said:
>Cherry_Moon said:
>>should never have pulled that stupid stunt

>nice, cherry

i admit that there was stuff i could've done to prevent myself from knowing what i know.


 
Mouse Posted: Fri Apr 21 18:44:54 2006 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Cherry_Moon said:
>Mouse said:
>>I like it. Nicely put, brava.
>
>thank you mousie dearest *tacklehugs*. do you like my avatar?

Very much. :)
I have to put it in my desktop folder so I'll get to see it blown up a lot.
Mouse


 



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