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ehwazingwaz Posted: Tue Nov 17 00:24:34 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  (just a little something i wrote today, and i thought i'd share. comments welcome!)


O, my heart, be still!
Typical lines for typical ears
I need not your words of fancy
But only the ones which are sincere

Oh sweet love, be mine!
Terrible lines from terrible hearts
I donít want your fancy flowers
Only a real momento of your love

Oh, darling love of mine!
Twitching slightly, twitching less
I think you should cook me dinner
But only if itís a genuine recipe

O, the honey is so sweet!
Grasping tightly for one last grasp
I canít take your expensive presents
Only will I be holding your hand.


 
addi Posted: Tue Nov 17 11:16:13 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Very nice, waz. I'm always one for encouraging more creative writing like this here.
Was this inspired by something happening in real life?

*and it's probably a good thing for you that Christophe and Asswipe aren't posting here still. They might have scarred you for life with their critiques. ; )


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Tue Nov 17 12:28:45 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  addi said:
>Very nice, waz. I'm always one for encouraging more creative writing like this here.
>Was this inspired by something happening in real life?

thank you. :) and yes, it is based on real-life, but i'll let you work out the abstractions on your own.

>
>*and it's probably a good thing for you that Christophe and Asswipe aren't posting here still. They might have scarred you for life with their critiques. ; )

lol. :) well, i've been through a few critiques in my day...not all of them are pleasant (nor can they all be lovely), and yes, its hard to swallow sometimes. i would still listen, even if they tore it to shreds.


 
Puck Posted: Tue Nov 17 15:25:06 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  ehwazingwaz said:
>even if they tore it to shreds.

it would make a fantastic pinata!


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Thu Nov 19 01:54:32 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Puck said:
>ehwazingwaz said:
>>even if they tore it to shreds.
>
>it would make a fantastic pinata!

i'd hit that!


 
Puck Posted: Thu Nov 19 16:59:12 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  WIN


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Thu Nov 19 19:18:43 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  :-p


 
mat_j Posted: Thu Dec 3 08:32:01 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  Great stuff Waz, it's been a while since i've had the gumption to stick any of my ramblings on here.

I enjoyed it, thanks you.


 
ehwazingwaz Posted: Thu Dec 3 18:49:36 2009 Post | Quote in Reply  
  :">


 



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