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| ehwazingwaz | Posted: Tue Nov 24 11:37:17 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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<wrote this a long time ago, this is the edited version, please tell me your thoughts.>
I only love you Because she loves you I only miss you because she does too I only need you because you're so far away (from her) I only care because she cares for you I only want to have you because you are here I only move on for my own sake I only say goodbye because she longs to say hello I only wish you happiness because with you she's happy I only miss you because she does too I only miss you because I'm not with you I only miss you I'll always love you But you'll never know I only need you because you're so far away (from my heart) I only give up because you have too I only love because my heart still beats I only love unconditionally |
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| Puck | Posted: Tue Nov 24 17:49:47 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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| Kira | Posted: Tue Nov 24 23:26:02 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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That's lovely, Waz. And so sad, but for those final two lines, which seem to make all that anguish somehow... clean. |
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| ehwazingwaz | Posted: Thu Nov 26 12:16:44 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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Kira said:
>That's lovely, Waz. And so sad, but for those final two lines, which seem to make all that anguish somehow... clean. thank you. i hadn't previously recognized those last two lines as being cleansing. *re-evaluates* :-D |
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| mat_j | Posted: Thu Dec 3 08:35:49 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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Again I am imrpessed, and i'm not often impressed.
It sounds like something my mind would start doing behind my back. |
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| ehwazingwaz | Posted: Thu Dec 3 18:46:36 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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mat_j said:
>Again I am imrpessed, and i'm not often impressed. > >It sounds like something my mind would start doing behind my back. :-D and i don't even consider this one to be incredibly strong... |
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| Puck | Posted: Thu Dec 3 20:22:26 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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I guess the strong ones are like a knee in the gut, huh? |
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| ehwazingwaz | Posted: Fri Dec 4 03:11:31 2009 | Post | Quote in Reply |
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Puck said:
>I guess the strong ones are like a knee in the gut, huh? i sure hope so. i try to make them that way. :-) i should post something a little bolder, yes? |
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